Fox in the Penalty Area - ~ Status report

Using these few days, I finally saved enough nine chapters for manuscripts.

Originally, I planned to publish a single chapter today to announce the update tomorrow.

But after thinking about it, I always feel that I can write better.

The existing manuscripts have indeed explained all the information that should be explained, but I am not very satisfied with the way of explaining the information. The characters and stories are too flat.

This kind of difference is like I tell everyone that the character I am describing is a good person through a few specific small incidents, and it is the same as when I directly write "he is a good person" in the text.

The latter is really not watery, and the five words include the content of my 5,000-word account.

But personally, I don't think that fits with the overall style of my book.

I want to avoid this situation as much as possible.

This requires a lot of attention to design plots and scenes.

After all, it has been four years, and there are too many things that have not been explained. If I go straight to the point, everyone will just be confused—huh? What happened to that who?

ah? Who is this person?

ah? What happened in between?

ah? What did I miss?

…

But if I only write the key nodes in these four years in chronological order, the story will be too fragmented, too fragmented, and too jumpy.

Therefore, it is necessary to concentrate on an appropriate time and explain the information one by one.

I don't want to throw out all aspects of what happened in the past four years by throwing away the background setting. It's easy and mind-free, but it's not beautiful—no characters, no story, and no graphics.

Unless it is absolutely necessary and there is really no way, I still try not to use this method.

All of the above, I know that I need to spend more time to rewrite the beginning of the last volume.

In fact, I am very satisfied with the first four chapters of this volume. When I first wrote it, I wanted to update it immediately for everyone to see. I spent a lot of time writing it.

But the latter part has to be overthrown and restarted...

I know everyone is anxious, but I am even more anxious than you...

After all, breaking updates also has a great impact on performance.

But there is no way, I said that I should write this last volume with my heart, leave a beautiful ending, and I must do it.

In fact, this kind of situation that has been written and then overturned and rewritten is very common in this book.

It's just that in the first half of the book, because there are still enough manuscripts, this kind of overturning and restarting was completed before everyone could perceive it.

If there is no manuscript saved in the later period, naturally it can only be interrupted...

That's why I always have to save manuscripts.

I am not the kind of author with different talents. I often deny myself, and I have to revise and revise a book repeatedly, grinding back and forth.

This process of grinding is very painful, and I often have to compete with my own laziness—sometimes I really think, "Why don't I just do this, anyway, I have written everything that should be written, so I can get the job done."

But in the end, he gritted his teeth and stomped his feet, and decided to start over.

It was really painful to write this book, but I believe that when I finish writing it, I will go back and read this book in its entirety, all the pain and effort will be worth it.

I hope everyone can understand, and thank you for your tolerance and support.

Everything is for you to see a better story, a more real world.

So I don't know the return date yet, and when I finish rewriting, I will definitely post a single chapter to tell everyone as soon as possible.